I wish on my sleeve
I wore a rewind or a
fast forward button
Instead of my heart
with dirty marks of no luck
and lack of control
I would be able
to revisit happiness;
not have to pretend
I wore a rewind or a
fast forward button
Instead of my heart
with dirty marks of no luck
and lack of control
I would be able
to revisit happiness;
not have to pretend
9 comments:
ds... you really know how to push a girls buttons.... my thoughts exactly....
This broke my heart! Great little poem!
You sweeped it to death...
It's the four words "or a fast forward" that make this a poem of hope rather than despair. Nice.
how beautifully spoken...
I agree with Paisley.
Wow.
This was unbelievable!!!
Instead of my heart
with dirty marks of no luck
and lack of control
I enjoyed the entire thing, but that stanza... just amazing.
Great thought! I'd sign up for one in an instant! Nicely wished!
Thank you all for your kind words!
This reminded me of that movie I never saw, Click. (I saw previews.)
I'd definitely use the rewind and slow motion buttons most often, I think. Sometimes pause. But never fast forward.
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