Saturday, January 19, 2008

Stayin' alive

This was a prompt from Writing Companion where you are asked to write something using a song title as your title. I chose to use one of the songs that were supplied.

Inspired by the title - Stayin' Alive - The Bee Gees


Hanging from the wall of life
nails dug deeply in
cringing as you feel each grain
bouncing off your chin
.
Trying to remain aloft
kicking with your feet
wondering what it would be like
underneath a sheet
.
In your head just dangling there
death you do contrive
you fight so hard to let go
why do you stay alive?

2 comments:

paisley said...

this is a new one on me... you know i am on my way... ... good poem,,, i have to admit tho i totally hate this song... so glad you didn't go for the video option!!!!!!

deathsweep said...

I was never thrilled with the song myself, the title is what grabbed me.