Fouled lungs,
Options given
Unkind decisions,
Late discovery
Fouled liver,
Options few,
Unwanted cells,
Looks bad
Fouled bowel,
Options chosen,
Unneeded biopsy,
Last rights
Friday, February 1, 2008
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It's the smallest things in life that add to the wealth of our being. Millions of Pennies is all about the things that make us smile, the little things, the tiny stuff.
8 comments:
excellent!! now this was really cool... i know that is probably not a good word for a fatal diagnosis.......
hey could you pop over to "pearls before swine"
and see what you think about that for me????
Sounds terminal to me! A huge amount said in very few words - and that's clever.
Well written ... a foul diagnosis!
Foul situation. Excellent words.
You made excellent use of this accrostic poem! I so agree with you!
Great acrostic work; it invokes many mental images.
My Scribblings are up... not for the faint of heart... come visit!
Using the form for the prompt works. Thanks for the read.
That was amazing. I hope it was not autobiographical.
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