Friday, February 1, 2008

Foul, foul, foul

Fouled lungs,
Options given
Unkind decisions,
Late discovery

Fouled liver,
Options few,
Unwanted cells,
Looks bad

Fouled bowel,
Options chosen,
Unneeded biopsy,
Last rights

8 comments:

paisley said...

excellent!! now this was really cool... i know that is probably not a good word for a fatal diagnosis.......
hey could you pop over to "pearls before swine"
and see what you think about that for me????

keith hillman said...

Sounds terminal to me! A huge amount said in very few words - and that's clever.

Redness said...

Well written ... a foul diagnosis!

anthonynorth said...

Foul situation. Excellent words.

Linda said...

You made excellent use of this accrostic poem! I so agree with you!

Lori V. (doyourealize) said...

Great acrostic work; it invokes many mental images.

My Scribblings are up... not for the faint of heart... come visit!

susan said...

Using the form for the prompt works. Thanks for the read.

myrtle beached whale said...

That was amazing. I hope it was not autobiographical.