Sunday, May 25, 2008


Hands down, It needs to end, I'm tired, bored and sore
on call from dusk, til dawn, til dusk again,
screaming I want no more
There's only so much I can give before my mind gets charred,
you'd think I would have picked this up
the first time I was scarred
I need to float away from this, indeed before it's too late
so I can still walk with pride,
forgetting this feeling of hate


paisley said...

then do it damn it.. downsize,, cut back.. and be happy....

gautami tripathy said...

Do it...

ghost of words jumping haphazardly

Anonymous said...

hey david, here is that site i was talking about where i made the extra cash this summer, it's pretty cool... anyway,
check it out ..

Granny Smith said...

It sounds like it's time too quit. Well put.

danni said...

this sounds like it came right from your toes --- and you already have your solution - bravo!

anthonynorth said...

Do what you need to do, I say.

MedStudentWife said...

ciao ???

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