Thursday, August 14, 2008

Not flawless

Strolling down Ditmars Avenue, thinking of all there was to do before I would propose, the home I would refurbish, that feminine wounded heart that needed to heal. I didn't even notice his hand or his pockmarked face, a pickpocket, as he lifted the diamond I intended for her. Three more things for the list; pay better attention, buy a new ring, and insure it.

2 comments:

Michelle Johnson said...

Nice job, deathsweep. It's always a good idea to insure an expensive item especially in this instance. Well done. Have a nice day.

Greyscale Territory said...

What a "crisp" drama! Just a few words can paint an amazing picture!