Friday, February 1, 2008

Foul, foul, foul

Fouled lungs,
Options given
Unkind decisions,
Late discovery

Fouled liver,
Options few,
Unwanted cells,
Looks bad

Fouled bowel,
Options chosen,
Unneeded biopsy,
Last rights
at

8 comments:

  1. paisleyFebruary 1, 2008 at 2:26 PM

    excellent!! now this was really cool... i know that is probably not a good word for a fatal diagnosis.......
    hey could you pop over to "pearls before swine"
    and see what you think about that for me????

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 1, 2008 at 8:14 PM

    Sounds terminal to me! A huge amount said in very few words - and that's clever.

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 2, 2008 at 12:45 AM

    Well written ... a foul diagnosis!

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  4. anthonynorthFebruary 2, 2008 at 9:40 AM

    Foul situation. Excellent words.

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  5. LindaFebruary 2, 2008 at 6:53 PM

    You made excellent use of this accrostic poem! I so agree with you!

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  6. AnonymousFebruary 3, 2008 at 10:15 AM

    Great acrostic work; it invokes many mental images.

    My Scribblings are up... not for the faint of heart... come visit!

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  7. susanFebruary 4, 2008 at 9:34 AM

    Using the form for the prompt works. Thanks for the read.

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  8. myrtle beached whaleFebruary 4, 2008 at 11:27 PM

    That was amazing. I hope it was not autobiographical.

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