Wednesday, January 30, 2008

Sorrows, drowned

Too often I approach
and try to correct
today's problems
.
Depending on a bottle
of any proof or sort
who gives a damn
.
As long as it will smooth
the tiresome days wrinkles
I want to forget
at

15 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2008 at 6:15 AM

    These three words were perfect for you.

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  2. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2008 at 8:25 AM

    "As long as it will smooth
    the tiresome days wrinkles
    I want to forget"

    How I wish...

    bag and baggage

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  3. NormaJanuary 30, 2008 at 8:49 AM

    We were definitely thinking along the same lines, but with a different outcome!

    http://collectingmythoughts.blogspot.com/2008/01/three-word-wednesday-each-week-bone.html

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  4. ULJanuary 30, 2008 at 9:56 AM

    Approach with care...instead of leaps, and those wrinkles might be forgotten forever...very nice.

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  5. TherJanuary 30, 2008 at 11:14 AM

    Drinking will never take out the wrinkles though... =)

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  6. paisleyJanuary 30, 2008 at 12:21 PM

    a couple of years ago i took to drinking often at night alone,, but i quit ,, all it was doing was squelching my ability to dream... and i love dreaming......

    very nice for a quickie..

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  7. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2008 at 1:54 PM

    A bit of the drink taken. Short and soothing going down.

    Rose

    xo

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  8. PJDJanuary 30, 2008 at 1:55 PM

    "some drink to remember/some drink to forget"

    interesting poem that speaks of a sort of defeatist emotion.

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  9. UnknownJanuary 30, 2008 at 2:07 PM

    This really touched me because of my father's alcoholism.
    Intense use of the words this week.

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  10. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2008 at 2:33 PM

    I never understood drinking away problems much, but I liked the way your words flowed here.

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  11. Tumblewords:January 30, 2008 at 3:53 PM

    Surely a definitive poem! I feel the angst. Nice!

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  12. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2008 at 4:05 PM

    I understand wanting to forget too well

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  13. little wing writerJanuary 31, 2008 at 3:58 PM

    some days... a smooth taste is just enough.. of course, one does not get carried away... i thought you spoke well....

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  14. poefusionJanuary 31, 2008 at 6:36 PM

    as long as you're not forgetting all of life then, why not? your poem as always is a good one. thanks for sharing. have a nice night.

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  15. TCFebruary 3, 2008 at 11:54 PM

    Seems like the wrinkles only get more complex the next day. Nicely done.

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