tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8373897979302278270.post8047097027042311758..comments2023-10-28T09:14:30.638-04:00Comments on Millions of Pennies: Science, medicine, ethicsdeathsweephttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04942097009456195845noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8373897979302278270.post-27940715339049831742008-02-07T19:02:00.000-05:002008-02-07T19:02:00.000-05:00deathsweep,I loved the catheter line, but I got a ...deathsweep,<BR/><BR/>I loved the catheter line, but I got a bit lost following the rest of it. I think there is a lot here but I can't manage to grasp it completely.SAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06883246938974320603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8373897979302278270.post-8140802027308786052008-02-06T22:24:00.000-05:002008-02-06T22:24:00.000-05:00i haven't been to the site,, so i don't know what ...i haven't been to the site,, so i don't know what the prompt was ,, but whatever it was it zapped your creativity... i know exactly what it was saying,, but i would love to have you follow it up with a rewrite,,, in your own words and style... i bet you any money it would be 10 times as well received as this....<BR/><BR/>i knew even before i looked at your tags,, this was not you speaking.....paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8373897979302278270.post-45245890325722291772008-02-06T13:14:00.000-05:002008-02-06T13:14:00.000-05:00deathsweep,The tone is clear, but the criticism is...deathsweep,<BR/>The tone is clear, but the criticism is general. There is no focus to latch to, no central figure. How could you revise this to something specific? Who is your speaker and to whom is he speaking?susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14924982664582970754noreply@blogger.com